Woot

I'm stoked. I got my first round of crit last night, and I got excellent feedback.

First of all, anything "negative" they had to say was right on, exactly what bugged me about the story along with extremely helpful fix ideas. Specifically, I have trouble with dialogue (lots of "he said, she said, he said filtering). They helped me find some other alternatives.

And everyone complimented it, laughed in the right places, and generally appeared to enjoy it. I'm very very excited about that. If nothing else, I entertained some folks.

Plus, they all said the sex worked well in context.

I'm all excited to work on it more now. I hate saying "it" all the time, but the title is a secret for now. I'll spill it in a couple weeks when I submit, potentially with an excerpt.